First Draft/Evaluation

This is our draft of our film. As you can see it is not entirely finished yet, but we wanted to show it to an audience to get some feedback on how it was looking so far. Two of our audience members felt that they didn't quite understand how the first character and the two characters with the bag were connected. one person thought the scene with the two characters was meant to be a flashback!

Chase sequence
We are going to film some more footage of me chasing Sam at the end of the sequence.

Cross cutting
we are going to shoot some more footage on my way to meet the "boss" so we can cross cut between me walking and Sam walking so that the audience can understand that they are approaching the same place.

The end 
We decided to change the ending and now I'm going to die in an accident and we'll have Sam live so that it the audience know that he has to get away because the "boss" is after him.